Lemonade
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LEMONADE
When sidewalks hiss like bacon fat,
Take note.
The wise man will not trust his coat,
Like that.
Just squeeze two lemons in a glass,
Ice first.
The cubes arrive to quench your thirst,
Not pass.
One sip demotes the sun from king,
Heat fled.
That's why our grandmothers stirred instead.
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This is The Hendecastich by Michael Fantina
11 line poem
1 stanza
alternates iambic feet of four (tetrameter) and one (monameter)
i.e. syllables: 8-2-8-2-8-2-8-2-8-2-8
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Delightful write, now i'm thirsty
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I'm so impressed with how you squeezed this thirst quenching poem into the Hendecastich poetry style
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