Lemonade

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LEMONADE


When sidewalks hiss like bacon fat,
Take note.
The wise man will not trust his coat,
Like that.
Just squeeze two lemons in a glass,
Ice first.
The cubes arrive to quench your thirst,
Not pass.
One sip demotes the sun from king,
Heat fled.
That's why our grandmothers stirred instead.

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This is The Hendecastich by Michael Fantina

11 line poem
1 stanza
alternates iambic feet of four (tetrameter) and one (monameter)
i.e. syllables: 8-2-8-2-8-2-8-2-8-2-8
rhyme scheme: abbacddceff

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Prompted by those sour puckers over at DVerse Poets Pub.

©2026 Christopher Reilley 

 
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  1. Delightful write, now i'm thirsty

    Much love

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  2. I'm so impressed with how you squeezed this thirst quenching poem into the Hendecastich poetry style

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  3. Nicely done Chris - especially the rhyming. 👏

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  4. A Hendecastich with a citrus flare, Chris!

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  5. This "sour pucker" appreciates your Hendecastich, Christoher...

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  6. Cute and clever, Chris! Cheers!

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