November of a Life

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November of a Life


I’ve had a heart issue, it’s true.
Now I’m freaked about what I do.

Smoking has to go, this I know,

as does the rum that soothes in kind.
Time’s tick sounds loud to aging mind.

Almost last of my clan to go,

so many poems yet left to write;
I won’t go down without a fight.

November of a life - go slow.
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Thanks to those fun folks over at DVerse Poets for introducing a new form; a Nove Otto. This poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. 

It is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). 
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.
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©2024 Christopher Reilley 

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Comments

  1. I agree, Go Slow on Life but keep your fire and fighting spirit going. Thanks for joining in. Have a good weekend.

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  2. Indeed.. we want more than we can I think

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  3. Never go without a fight, but go slowly in life.

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