The Cherokee Legend of the Wolves
THE CHEROKEE LEGEND OF THE WOLVES
There is a story told among the Cherokee
A grandfather relates to his grandson
Of the battle that happens inside of you and me
And the way in which it can be won.
Two wolves are fighting inside us all
And they fight until they can fight no more.
To the battle we are all held in thrall
We are both the prize and the source of the war.
The first is Evil, made from anger and greed,
Plus sorrow, regret, arrogance and false pride
With ego and self pity, resentment and need
And all of the foolishness man has inside.
The second is Good, it is joy, faith and love
Hope, humility, kindness and peace.
It is benevolence, serenity, the gifts from above
The humility to cherish the least.
But which wolf wins, the boys asks the man
Which one will ultimately succeed?
The choice is yours, if you do what you can
The winner is the wolf that you feed.
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Shared as a poem of choice for my very first night hosting DVerse Poets!
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©2014 Christopher Reilley
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I really love the conclusion of this poem, giving us the power to choose what is good. You always hope for comeuppance in life for those siding with their evil side. Maybe that's why we had to invent afterlife to hand out rewards for those who made the right choice.
ReplyDeleteI admire this line: We are both the prize and the source of the war. Also the conclusion: the winner is the wolf that you feed. I can feel that battle everyday but as I get older, the choice to do good and to do better gets stronger now. And also, it is good that we have these choices, so that we choose our path, we do so with passion and action. Thanks for hosting Chris!
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting, Christopher, and for sharing this amazing poem. I used to be enthralled by all things Native American, but over the years my interest has waned a bit. I’m glad you whetted my appetite again. If only we all had a Cherokee grandfather to share his wisdom.
ReplyDeleteI never heard the whole story, only the ending. Thank you. Yes, I believe there are two choices, life and death. We need to choose life. Oh it is not always easy!! I may choose to Not post this time.
ReplyDeletei have heard this in many formats. have always agreed with its sentimentthanks for sharing here. great job hosting.
ReplyDeleteLuv the rhymes. The message and the conclusion. Wonderful telling
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A lot of wisdom in this. I like the yin and yang within us, and the ending is very very true.
ReplyDeleteOh hell yes Chris, and that battle rages even to your dying day. And ultimately, you never truly know if you chose right — and it makes no difference, as long as you chose honestly.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem, full of wisdom. We are often our own worst enemy!
ReplyDeleteI second Grace. The best line is 'You are both the prize and the source of war.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the elements of fable and proverb captured in rhyme, also the poetic frame of the old man and the boy sets it up nicely. Two wolves there are/I think I know . . . .
ReplyDeleteThat's the way cats are, the person they obey and love most is the one who feeds them. This was a nice to read fable/folk story. Thank you.
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After the horror that happened in Bend on Sunday evening .... your poetry resonated more deeply than I could ever have imagined.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of good vs evil in this, personified by the wolves, and you delivered the story through this poem extremely well.
ReplyDeleteThe wolf we feed...Your story telling skills through verse are par excellence, Christopher! Thanks for the prompt.
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It's a worthy myth. Unfortunately some wolves know how to go out and hunt on their own, despite our best efforts...
ReplyDeleteYes, I remember this tale and it is worth resharing. We have choice in the wolf we feed. It is an empowering reminder.
ReplyDeleteI can see this as a parable for the schoolroom. There are so may ways it could be approached to trigger discussion and learning.
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ReplyDelete"We are both the prize and the source of the war."
ReplyDeleteGreat line, and wonderful legend!