How the Flag Learned to Taste Like Mud
How the Flag Learned to Taste Like Mud
The flag lay in the dirt like spilled grain,
and everyone swore they were feeding it.
The roosters charged first, chests puffed,
spurs bloody from fighting their own reflections,
screaming dawn into the wrong century.
Pigs stood on hind legs at the fence,
pink mouths full of the word freedom,
chewing it until it meant mine.
A pair of watchdogs snapped at shadows,
foam flying, collars stamped with slogans,
while the gate hung open behind them.
Horses ran in tight, obedient circles,
eyes blinders-wide, trampling whatever fell—
they called it discipline.
Above it all, eagles circled lower and lower,
not hunting, just waiting,
confusing ownership with altitude.
At the tree line, feral coyotes laughed,
lean with hunger and opportunity,
patient as bankers, sharp as knives.
By dusk, the flag was unrecognizable,
mud-slick, torn, still invoked,
and everyone agreed it had suffered heroically.
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And there we are... admiring the heroisim of being torn apart.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't help but thinlk of Orwell's Animal Farm as i read your poem, even though no flags there
ReplyDeleteBravo
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Brilliant fierce, unsettling barnyard imagery showing how patriotism gets twisted, dirtied, and devoured. Those coyotes... Awesome write Chris 👏
ReplyDeleteI couldn't help but think how the nature and animals don't give two cents about our flags at all ... The ones we try to protect and honour... Maybe there is something to learn from that.
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