Too Much Murder



TOO MUCH MURDER


Camera flares catch her unawares, being dragged down courtroom steps, arms held out at the elbows, a thick, stout-jowled bailiff on either side. She squints upward deflecting the questions that hammer her through the winter-whipped air.

"I did it because it needed doing," she says, "because he hurt me, he slipped me tainted euphoria, sexually transmitted doses of ecstasy and anguish."

She stops, holding back the bull-dog men, the adrenaline rush sex-mask glistening in her eyes, this bottled blonde with no justification in her voice, "He was too much murder to live, you know?"

And then this killing woman, this violator of the sacred codes, looks skyward, where redemption is thought to dwell, and sighs once, the breath of lonely atonement vaporizing into crystalline wisps of frost before disappearing forever.

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To be alone, sucks.
To be paired, yet all alone
drives us past the point.
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This haibun (prose/haiku combo) was prompted by those lovers of tabloid poetry over at DVerse Poets.

©2022 Christopher Reilley
 
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  1. Wow, Christopher! You are one for surprises. I didn't expect "tabloid poetry." Amazing! Thank you for starting things off today with a bang.🙂

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  2. Quite an intricate character study, some areas in broad strokes and others with deft brushstrokes. It's too bad her dark roots will be showing soon in her cell.

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  3. Great flash of drama, she sounds like a real piece of work!

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  4. Well that was a surprise! Tabloid Poetry! LOL. Well done Christopher.

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  5. Wow, I hope it is fiction, but sadly, it is truer than we realize. Love the haiku!

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  6. A wonderful haiku to go with your dramatic haibun! Well done.

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  7. Being alone, yet being with, is perhaps the emptiest feeling in the world!

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    1. This has a fascinating darkness about it that captivated me!

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  8. This makes me think of the judgement of Myra Hindley, 'bottle blonde' therefore deserved no pity. I like the indictment of her judges. Acerbic.

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  9. This is so good! The haiku in the end is so true.

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