What You Are Not
WHAT YOU ARE NOT
You are not your count of years
or the freckles on your cheeks.
You are not your jumbled thoughts
or the words you did not speak.
You are not your school homework
or the tests that you have passed,
you are not the first in line,
but you are also not the last.
You are every book you have ever read
and every song you have ever sung.
You are most you when you are working hard
and sticking out your tongue.
You are tangled hair in the morning
and smiles that you try hard to hide,
you are the sweet tinkling bells of laughter
and the last time that you cried.
You are the songs that you sing to yourself
when you know you are all alone,
you are every place you've ever been to
and the one that you call your home.
You are the things that you believe in,
and every person that you love,
you are your precious mementos,
and all the things you're dreaming of.
You are choice and opportunity,
and potential to be great,
you are someone's heart's desire
as well as their perfect mate.
You are made of stars and magic
but it seems that you forgot
when you decided that you were defined
by all the things that you are not.
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Shared with DVerse Poets for Open Link Night.
©2014 Christopher Reilley
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I love this poem... it shows so much you can do with negation, and what you shouldn't negate. The way you used the thesis antithesis throughout the poem is stellar.
ReplyDeleteEvery young girl should have this on their wall to read every day. Excellent.
ReplyDelete*applause!*
ReplyDeleteSpot on and beautifully written, Chris!
~David
You are perfectly wonderful
ReplyDeleteAnd quite beautifully so
Even if its true in-fact
You simply do not know
This was splendidly special Chris!
I really like your message here! You are exactly right it is the distractions that make us doubt ourselves rather than the truth.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is simply grand, defies superlatives and I believe it should be on the mirror in every young girl's bath.
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