Her Average Day







HER AVERAGE DAY


She slides into her room,
private, alone,
peels off her average day
one layer at a time.

Before the window
she strips off nylons,
jewelry, the cross at her throat.
Flips hairpins onto the bureau
then leans naked over the window sill
into the bat-black.

She balls her stockings
and hurls them,
blinking,
into the street below.

He races along
head down,
late for the bus,
until the sheer leg-skin
caresses his down turned face,
curling as a lover might
across his shoulder.

He draws it close,
breathing in the remnants
of her average day.
He sees legs crossed under a desk
imagines feet clacking along concrete
his mind’s eye following
the legs as they walk upstairs.

He balls the hosiery
and stuffs them
unthinking
into the pocket of his coat.

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Shared with DVerse Poets from a prompt about "windows," which brought this piece immediately to mind.
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This poem appeared in "One Night Stanzas"
 
available from Big Table Publishing.
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©2009 Christopher Reilley
 
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Comments

  1. I love the intimate way strangers may cross paths without meeting

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  2. Now that was unexpected, Christopher! I love the thought of peeling off an average day and the ‘sheer leg-skin…curling as a lover might / across his shoulder’.

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  3. I also love the idea of peeling off an average day. I imagined a very noir sort of scene--though I hope the man wasn't going home to his wife.

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  4. love the words "sheer leg skin" adds a sense of romance to such a mundane activity.

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  5. What a vivid and interesting scenario! You leave us hanging... husband, lover, neighbor, new love? Waiting for the next segment! Well done.

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  6. What a lush story you weave, but I yearn for one stanza more!!! I love the poem , yet ....

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  8. Is she the reason he's late for the bus?!

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  9. This is brilliant I especially love this line 'peels off her average day' (AJ)

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  10. That was lovely, unexpected, intimate. Perfect for this prompt.

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