Her Average Day
HER AVERAGE DAY
She slides into her room,
private, alone,
peels off her average day
one layer at a time.
Before the window
she strips off nylons,
jewelry, the cross at her throat.
Flips hairpins onto the bureau
then leans naked over the window sill
into the bat-black.
She balls her stockings
and hurls them,
blinking,
into the street below.
He races along
head down,
late for the bus,
until the sheer leg-skin
caresses his down turned face,
curling as a lover might
across his shoulder.
He draws it close,
breathing in the remnants
of her average day.
He sees legs crossed under a desk
imagines feet clacking along concrete
his mind’s eye following
the legs as they walk upstairs.
He balls the hosiery
and stuffs them
unthinking
into the pocket of his coat.
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Shared with DVerse Poets from a prompt about "windows," which brought this piece immediately to mind.
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©2009 Christopher Reilley
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I love the intimate way strangers may cross paths without meeting
ReplyDeleteNow that was unexpected, Christopher! I love the thought of peeling off an average day and the ‘sheer leg-skin…curling as a lover might / across his shoulder’.
ReplyDeleteI also love the idea of peeling off an average day. I imagined a very noir sort of scene--though I hope the man wasn't going home to his wife.
ReplyDeletelove the words "sheer leg skin" adds a sense of romance to such a mundane activity.
ReplyDeleteWhat a vivid and interesting scenario! You leave us hanging... husband, lover, neighbor, new love? Waiting for the next segment! Well done.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lush story you weave, but I yearn for one stanza more!!! I love the poem , yet ....
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ReplyDeleteIs she the reason he's late for the bus?!
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant I especially love this line 'peels off her average day' (AJ)
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely, unexpected, intimate. Perfect for this prompt.
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