Something Old Something New
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Something Old, Something New
Something old—
my grandmother’s patience,
stitched into every hem she mended
and every mistake she called “practice.”
Something new—
my father’s smile today,
fresh as paint on a house he spent twenty years
building one paycheck at a time.
Something borrowed—
my mother’s courage.
I’ve been checking it out since birth,
renewing it whenever life’s due date arrived.
Something blue—
the tired shadows beneath their eyes,
earned honestly from late shifts, long drives,
and pretending not to worry.
And a sixpence in my shoe—
not luck. Luck’s a rumor.
This is bus fare, grocery money, overtime,
coupons clipped with surgical precision,
dreams deferred without filing a complaint.
The minister calls it a wedding.
I call it an invoice, finally paid.
Not by me—
by a family who spent years investing
in a future they might never see,
then showed up smiling for the dividend.
So here I stand,
rich in ways that never fit a bank account,
walking toward love
on the small change of their devotion.
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Posted with those folks over at DVerse Poets Pub. They borrowed something blue, or something.
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What a joy to read! You took a Victorian rhyme and ran it through the wringer of life and made it far richer than it deserved. I like how you took each phrase and made it personal, meaningful, with each detail telling a life story of love, hope and self-sacrifice, a history behind the newlyweds at the altar.
ReplyDeleteI identified with your ‘Something Old, Something New’, Chris; the grandmother’s patience especially resonated with me, as did the familiar ‘tired shadows beneath their eyes’ and the lines about the sixpence.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful written 😊
ReplyDelete~ Maggie
Brilliant piece iIt’s gritty, tender, and fiercely loyal, anchoring the emotion in hard work and sacrifice 🙌
ReplyDelete"rich in ways that never fit a bank account,"--that comes through, Christopher!
ReplyDeleteI love how you adopted all the rhymes to your family's history which is so much more than that wedding.
ReplyDelete"coupons clipped with surgical precision,"
ReplyDeleteNice one, Christopher
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much love
Chris, this has my heart. So beautiful, replete with emotions I can feel.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous, Chris. I love your family tribute and learning from insights into your admiration and appreciation for them.
ReplyDeleteOh those 'tired shadows beneath their eyes.' I can see and feel that.
ReplyDeleteYour appreciation comes through so clearly.
My mum was all those people for me. I believe we have turned out well Chris. Great write 👏
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