Find Me in the Unfinished Things
Find Me in the Unfinished Things
Empty the good whiskey into mismatched cups
and call it a ceremony, not a mistake.
Argue loudly over who gets the blue chair—
it wobbles like my last opinions—
then fix it together with something stubborn and ugly.
Pocket my bad jokes; spend them recklessly.
They age better than I did.
Feed the stray ideas that scratch at your doors.
Some will bite; name them anyway.
Write letters you never send, then send them by accident.
Blame the envelope.
When the world hands you a clean answer, dirty it—
truth should look like it survived a bar fight.
Forgive me in installments, like a bill you keep forgetting on purpose.
Borrow each other’s courage the way siblings borrow jackets—
without asking, never returning the same shape.
Taste everything twice: once for flavor, once for story.
Laugh at the wrong moments.
Especially the right ones.
Keep a small, ridiculous hope in your back pocket—
lint-covered, indestructible.
And when you miss me, don’t go looking—
make something instead and leave it unfinished
so I have somewhere to sit.
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Great imperative title, Chris, and excellent imperatives throughout your poem. I prefer mismatched cups, they give me choices, and I agree about feeding stray ideas.
ReplyDeleteSuch comfort and pleasure to sit a while with you in this poem, like a chair. You made the imperative voice close and intimate, breathing what is cherished with each image building on the other to construct what's lovable and adored in life, in a relationship. A masterpiece, Christopher. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteOutstanding roster of imperatives, well-blended. My hat's off.
ReplyDeleteLove everything about this....the chair that wobbles like my opinions is a truly fantastic comparison! Mismatched cups....mismatched life careers...none need be a mistake. Enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteGreat creative lines. Enjoyed this
ReplyDelete"Pocket my bad jokes; spend them recklessly.
ReplyDeleteThey age better than I did."
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Nice one, Chtistopher
Much love
Bohemian imperitave is a fine accommodation of the the mood, like patched jeans and good whiskey in bad glasses. Besides, poetry has no face or fate. (Blame the horoscope.)
ReplyDeleteI hear your voice so clearly in this. I like who I'm seeing.
ReplyDeleteeric here. thank you for this! permission to leave a project unfinished! (which i will do anyway but now with 2/3 less guilt!) lol
ReplyDeleteExcellent write Chris 👏 Great details and I think I want to grab some inspiration from this sometime in the future 👍
ReplyDeleteI wish I could pick a favourite line, but that would be so unfair to others. I like your poem in entirety, Chris! Fantastic!
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