Her Smile
Her Smile
Twenty years on,
her brown-eyed smile still finds me
first—quiet, crooked, devastating.
It carries every shared morning,
every survived storm,
every mutual forgiveness.
Time hasn’t worn it down;
it’s sharpened it. It bites.
One look and I am forty again,
undone, chosen, re-made–
home.
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This Quadrille (44 word poem) shared with those Smiley Faces (which was invented by Harvey Ball in Worcester, MA, home of Elizabeth Bishop, Stanley Kunitz, and Richard Fox) over at DVerse Poets Pub. But the smile I write about is all Susan.
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A wonderful tribute... so much is in a smile.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely love/tribute poem to the one with the smile <3
ReplyDeleteLove love LOVE. What a gorgeous tribute to a beautiful smile.
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Nice one
ReplyDelete🎇much love
this smile poem pierced my heart -
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Truly.
ReplyDeleteYour words are bittersweet in my head. Wishing I could see the smile of my husband who has passed and blessed to see the smile of the husband I have now.
ReplyDeleteTime hones smiles; smiles cut through time. Great stuff
ReplyDeleteA smile can make us feel young again! Yes....forty!
ReplyDeleteLOVE everything about this....and mostly the last three lines!
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